FL2 les 2.9

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• vwo
• Leerjaar 2

Welcome! 

Today:

Homework this week in diary

Info peer feedback

Giving peer feedback

Take in front of you: tb, notebook, pen

Homework

Tu 2nd of Nov: Lr Build up ch 3

Fri 5th of Nov: Lr sentence blocks 5, 6 & 14

Mo the 8th of Nov: M Improve essay + type it 

Lr Build up ch ch 4&5

Now: peer feedback

Checklist peer feedback writing p1

(based on Cambridge marking guides- see p 194 Gold First)

- Does it read easily? (communicative achievement)

- Is all info from assignment there? (content)

- Is all content relevant? (no unnecessary extra's) (content)

- Does the text have proper paragraphs? (organisation)

- Does the text use linking words? (see p 198 Gold First)(organisation)

- Are the ideas put in writing structurally? (niet van de hak op de tak)(organisation)

Checklist peer feedback writing p2

checklist language part

- check grammar

- can more difficult grammar structures be used?

- check use of words 

- can more bueautiful words be used, can Synonyms be used?

- check spelling

- check interpunction

- check do's and don'ts in TB (essay p180/181)

Reader

p 23 = planning your writing

p 24 = checking your own work

p 25&26 = beoordelingsmodel

Last 3 pages can be used as checklist for peer feedback

Now

swap your essay with a peer and give eachother feeedback, so you can both improve your essays before handing them in to your teacher

Hand in the improved (and typed!) version of your essay on Mo the 8th of  Nov

Homework

Tu 2nd of Nov: Lr Build up ch 3

Fri 5th of Nov: Lr sentence blocks 5, 6 & 14

Mo the 8th of Nov: M Improve essay + type it 

Lr Build up ch ch 4&5

Now: peer feedback