Writing Lesson 2 - FE Cycle

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• vwo
• Leerjaar 3

Welcome

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Today

- Announcements

- Common mistakes letters

- Feedback letters

Announcements

- Catch-up sessions are next week. Overview of who needs to do what can be found in Teams

- I will post an overview of when we are going to do which test.

- DO NOT wait for this, start studying immediately. 

Final test (Test week)

    - Study Vocabulary (NE-EN/EN-NE) & Stones (NE-EN) Theme 1 & 2

    - Study Grammar of Theme 1, 2, 3 & 4.

    - Study the tenses (Tijdenschema)

What do you think of this?

I am doing great. I am in secondary school. It is going great. I have good grades.

I play football. I don't know what I want to become. I hope it will be something fun. I would like to live in a nice house with a nice family. 

Wat maakt een geschreven zinnen interessanter?

Writing Tips

- Use linking words to connect paragraphs and sentences. For example: besides, also, so, or, etc. 

- Use synonyms for variety and interesting reading.

- Keep the use of 'I' to a minimum* 

- Add personal details

- Combine sentences using linking words/relative pronouns

e.g. I am in school. It is going great. 

-> I am in school, which is going great. 

- Add specific information (time, place, reason)

e.g. I am in school, which is going great.

At this moment, I am still in school, which is going great.

Relative pronouns?

What can we replace 'nice' with?

What can we replace 'great' with?

More useful words to describe something or someone!

How can we improve these sentences?
''I am doing great. I am in secondary school. It is going great. I have good grades.''

What about this sentence?
'' I would like to live in a nice house with a nice family. ''

Does that mean that you always have to create longer sentences?

Task

Where? Teams & Email

What? Send your peer feedback to your peer & check your feedback in Teams & E-mail
How? Individually
Help? You can ask me for help.

Time? 10 minutes

Finished? Revise the Grammar, Vocabulary and Stones from Theme 1. 

End of the lesson

Any questions?

Remember!

Catch-up moment is next week! Start studying in time!