H5A - P2 - Week 5 - Lesson 2 - Essay Feedback

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H5 - P2 - Week 5 - Lesson 2

Learning Goals

You will...

- Learn from your writing mistakes

Essay Feedback

- What do you see? 

- Things that I noticed

- Good examples

- Correct the thesis statements

- Receive feedback on your own essay

- Grading system

Good thesis examples

Therefore, it should be mandatory for all grandchildren to spend at least a day a week with their grandparents.

It is important to help elderly people feel less lonely and more connected to others.

However, the biggest cause for loneliness among elderly is social media. 

Correct the thesis statement:
So the big question is how can the government prevent problems that are caused because of the refugees.

Correct the thesis statement:
They may go on a hike some time or play bingo with their friends but they mostly sit at home.

Learning Goals

You ...

- learned from your writing mistakes

Bye!