Peer Feedback Draft 1

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• vmbo t
• Leerjaar 2

Good Morning!

You will need:

Laptop (closed)

Pen

Notebook

Agenda

10 min. reading

Lesson Goals

Explain: Essay Structure

Peer Feedback Session

Review

10 min. reading

2 min. to choose a book, 8 min. silently reading

vocab.today/reader/

or Magister.Learn

Lesson Goals

By the end of today's lesson, you will be able to...

-Make a good sentence

-Give and get feedback from a friend

Sentence Structure

We usually write sentences like this:

Onderwerp + werkwoord + the rest

Example:

EN--> Tom went to school

NL--> Tom ging naar school

A bit more difficult...

EN--> Tom, Sandra and Bob decided to walk to Tom's big house

NL--> Tom, Sandra en Bob hebben besloten om naar Tom's grote huis te lopen.

Verb always follows subject in postive (+) sentences!

Peer feedback

With your red pen, check for:

-Hoofdletters

-Punten

-Onderwerp + werkwoord + the rest

-Spelling

Not good? Only circle the mistake!

Peer feedback

Tell your partner:

1 tip (what should they work on?)

1 top (What did they do well with?)

Look at your draft...

Do you have questions about your feedback? Ask the person who gave your feedback!

How can you write your second draft even better?

What did we learn today?

Can you...?

-Make a good sentence

-Give and get feedback from a friend