4H - Review Writing 4: Organization

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• vwo
• Leerjaar 4

Organization 

RECAP QUESTION 1:
What THREE THINGS should be in your introduction?

RECAP QUESTION 2: What FOUR THINGS should be in your body paragraphs?

RECAP QUESTION 3:
What THREE THINGS should be in your conclusion?

Organisation (5 points)

Is the review easy to read and well-organised, using paragraphs and linking words?

Does the review include more advanced linking words or linking phrases?

5pts Effective organisation through paragraphs, advanced linking words and transitional phrases. Linking words should include a nice range and work naturally.

4pts Good organisation through paragraphs, advanced linking words and transitional phrases. Linking words are advanced, but it is clear the student has learnt them instead of naturally choosing the one that works.

3pts Basic linking through paragraphs, linking words and phrases. Linking words are basic. It might include an attempt at some advanced ones.

2 pts The bare minimum of linking is present. The review only includes: but, because, and, or, also, first, second, next, etc

1 pt The review is hard to follow due to a lack of linking and organisation

Write down as many linking words as you can think of.

Linking

In your essay, use and, but, so, and because as little as possible. Instead, use more complex versions of these words! 

For the next slides, write a sentence using the upgraded linking words. 

One reason why McDonalds food is great is because of the fries.
Also, = Additionally,

First of all, visiting Italy is great because of the pasta. Also, = Moreover,

The first reason why I like Nike shoes is because of the colors. Also, = Futhermore,

KFC's chicken buckets taste great.
But = However

London has great shops.
But, = On the other hand,

ChatGPT is a great AI, ...
because = due to

I love visiting Artis zoo,
because = since

Bol.com has all the school material a first year student needs.
So = Therefore

TEMU's products are toxic, fake, and often stolen.
So = Consequently,

The ice cream at KJ plein is delicious.
For example = For instance

[3 body paragraphs about how great HEMA is]
In conclusion = All in all

Copy and learn by heart

Also = Additionally                  Also = Moreover

Also = Futhermore                  But = However

But = on the other hand       Because = due to

Because = Since                      So = Therefore

So = Consequently                 For example = for instance

In conclusion = All in all                                                 

Task

Review writing