Writing errors

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• vwo
• Leerjaar 5

I came across your study course where the lessons learnt from XXX are taught.

I'm writing you regarding Harvards online courses.

I took a look on the website....

I came across a class about XXX, which is teached by you.

Even though the registration has already ended, I would still like to participate.

Well done! Be clear about why you are writing!

I'm very intrested in XXX and I'm always thinking about solutions to turn the tide.

www.mentalfloss.com

Replace the 'very.....' with a better word:
very interesting

'very often'

'very large'

'very old'

'very good'

Tip:

Find stronger words to express yourself. However, make sure that particular word fits in the context of your letter. 

Avoid 'empty' words like 'very' and 'really'

Some Points to Remember:

• Watch your tone  (don't be too direct)
• Make paragraphs
• Write clear and concise (to the point but polite!)
• Closure: I look forward to hearing from you.
• Know the difference: Yours faithfully, Yours sincerely

Of Course Booklet

Read pages 32 - 36 for more tips

and practise!

Do your homework in Goformative.com. You'll be editing your letter several times till it's perfect! 

What do you need to work on?

Question yourself: 

Is it grammar, vocabulary, expressions, structure, etc.?

Do the work to fix it and ask questions!

'Writing' and an inquisitive mind are the best ways to learn how to write.