Lesson 21 - Feedback

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• havo
• Leerjaar 3

Lesson 21 Feedback time

• Please sit down in your seat.
• Take out your Travel Project booklet.
• Take out your laptop and open Teams
• Do this before the time is up.

We will start in:

Today

• Upload time
• Feedback
• Workbook B
• Vocabulary
• Blooket

Goals

• You can give constructive feedback to your group members.
• You know how to continue with your text on draft 3.
• You know how to use vocabulary related to arts and business.

Upload time

1. Open Microsoft Teams.
2. Upload your word file containing draft 1 and draft 2.
3. Name it [Your name; Travel Project; Drafts].
4. Help your teammates if they have issues.

How to give feedback

• Open a team member's file.
• Use the nieuwe opmerking option to give feedback.

• Give tops: What did this person do well.
• Give tips: Where can you spot possible grammar error's; where can you find room for improvement.

Spark

• Specific  Link your feedback to a specific part of the text.
• Prescriptive  Offer a solution to the problem you find.
• Actionable  When the feedback is read, the writer should know how to improve.
• References  The feedback has to do with the criteria you see in the criteria for success.
• Kind  Don't be mean, be critical and helpful

Feedback round 1

• Within your group, decide who gives who feedback.
• Leave feedback using Word in Teams.
• Do this individually, don't share your feedback.
• You have 5 mins.

Feedback round 2

• Within your group, decide who gives who feedback again.
• Leave feedback using Word in Teams.
• Do this individually, don't share your feedback.
• You have 5 mins.

Feedback conclusion

• Write down the feedback you received in your Travel Project booklet.
• Task 4b.
• Ask your groupmates for clarification if you don't understand their feedback. 

Workbook B

• Let's go through the revised outline.
• Let's go through the success criteria.

Task 5a Crossword

• Do exercise A with your group.
• You will have 5 minutes to finish the crossword puzzle.
• You can find the vocabulary in your All Right! book.

Task 5a Sentences

• Do exercise B on your own.
• Use three words from the crossword.
• Use two new words unit 3, lesson 4 and 5.

Blooket

• Go to Blooket.com/play
• Choose a randomly assigned name.
• Choose a Blooket picture.

Next lesson

Finish:

• Going through your feedback
• Task 5a: Art and Business vocabulary