You will get to see a couple of examples of things that soem pupils have written.
Tell me what do you think?
If you think it's correct: GREEN
If you think it isn't correct: RED
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Is this introduction correct?
Green or red?
Travelling isn't just like how it first was, because of the long waiting by Schiphol and all the other problems. So we need a new way to travel.
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Is this introduction correct?
Green or red?
In this text i will try to explain why I think taveling has changest. I will explain why do I think it has changest and maybe at the end you will think to.
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Do you understand the main point?
Green or red?
I think we should invent a new transport that could take us everywhere and it has to be very big. I also think that we should make it as nature friendly as possible. So my plan was to invent a very big type of train that would be made out of a very strong material.
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Do you understand the main point?
Green or red?
My first thougt that is coming to my mind is traveling with a high speed above the highway. Because it is high speed your faster on your final destination. the only problem is that you can't take many people at the moment. So there need to be many "cages" to get those people where they need to go.
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Are there any spelling mistakes?
Green or red?
I think traveling has changed over the few years, because more and more people has a car. The most house holds has two cars. That is because most of the people need to have a car so they can get to work. If there is many cars on the road there can get a fille on the road.
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Do you see enough arguments?
Green or red?
Traveling has changed. I think that because you need to wait really long when you go with a plain. But not only a plane also your tarveling with a car you are waiting way to long. Every year theres a new world record for waiting in a traffic jam. The trains are later because its so bussy at every train station.
I think we need to travel in a new way. And not a way like teleporting, but a way where nobody has trouble with traffic jams. We could travel a lot more through the air, but than the climate would be a big problem. We need to find a way thats as fast as a plane but not so damaging to the climate.
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How would you grade this essay?
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Round up
Homework monday:
Write an essay.
Choose one of the topics of your list.
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Watching & listening
Get a pen.
While you are listening try to answer the questions.
Lesson duration is: 80 min
