V6 - Period 1 - Essay Feedback 2022-2023

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V6 - Essay Feedback

Today's Lesson

Essay Feedback:

- What do you see? 

- Things that I noticed

- Correct the thesis statements

- Good examples

- Receive feedback on your own essay

- Grading system

Correct the thesis statement:
Studying will soon only be for the rich, is not this the time to ring the bells before it’s too late?!

Correct the thesis statement:
Is the study loan system getting out of hand?

Good thesis examples

Therefore, the government should pay twenty five percent of students study loans. 

That is why, the usage of digital technology by teenagers should be restricted.

Luckily, the future is bright: digital dementia will not affect society in the long run.

Finished!

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Well done!