V6 - Period 1 - Essay Feedback 2021-2022

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• vwo
• Leerjaar 6

V6 - Essay Feedback

Correct the thesis statement:
Because of that, advertisements should be banned.

Correct the thesis statement:
Nowadays, students have to pay their own education. Are study loans the solution for this problem?

Correct the thesis statement:
Are study loans a big problem and if so, how to get rid of them?

Correct the thesis statement:
So is studying going to be something for the rich, and if so, how should that problem be fixed.

Performance preparation

• Sit in your groups and prepare for your performance
• Does everyone have a part(s)?
• Make sure everyone has an equal amount to say
• What props/costumes can you think of?
• Be creative!

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