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V6 - Essay Feedback

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Today's Lesson
Essay Feedback:
- What do you see? 
- Things that I noticed
- Correct the thesis statements
- Good examples
- Receive feedback on your own essay
- Grading system

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Correct the thesis statement:
This decision would help with focus, but should we not instead teach students how to deal with those distractions?

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An example is the amount of distraction students have in the classroom, that is why the government wants to decide to ban all phones from within the classroom. 
Correct the thesis statement:
But in this comparison still lies the question: Are the smart monkeys covetous for their bananas?

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Correct the thesis statement:
And last but not least, for most money doesn’t come out of nowhere, so you will have make compromises in your daily life.

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Good thesis examples
Money has the power to corrupt the judgement of many, which makes it the root of all evil.

So, money can lead to evil, however definitely not all of it. 

Therefore, the government should pay twenty five percent of students study loans. 

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Finished!
You received feedback on your essay

You saw examples of do's and don'ts in essay writing

Well done!

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