Essay writing, part 2

Essay writing part 2
Gathering and structuring
1 / 15
suivant
Slide 1: Diapositive
EngelsMiddelbare schoolhavoLeerjaar 4

Cette leçon contient 15 diapositives, avec quiz interactif et diapositives de texte.

time-iconLa durée de la leçon est: 50 min

Éléments de cette leçon

Essay writing part 2
Gathering and structuring

Slide 1 - Diapositive

Cet élément n'a pas d'instructions

In the previous lesson...
You started with 
* Taking a text apart into paragraphs
and
* Adding titles

Slide 2 - Diapositive

Cet élément n'a pas d'instructions

Happy?
But were you already pleased with the paragraphs?
Or did it feel like something was missing?

Slide 3 - Diapositive

Cet élément n'a pas d'instructions

Instruction 1
We are going to take apart the writing about the bicycle even further and create a mind map with all the information that we have.
If you also wish to use https://bamboocycles.com/about/ 
that’s fine

Slide 4 - Diapositive

Students need something to write on. I would choose an empty sheet of paper
Bamboo
Bicycle

Slide 5 - Carte mentale

Cet élément n'a pas d'instructions

Make a mindmap 
Of everything you know (from your own writing) about the bamboo bicycle; take 5 minutes 
timer
5:00

Slide 6 - Diapositive

Time timer in screen or ...
I use https://www.online-stopwatch.com/rocket-timer/full-screen/

Include information from the website to add to your mind map.
.
.
So you have more information for writing longer paragraphs
Take 10 more minutes for research
timer
10:00

Slide 7 - Diapositive

Cet élément n'a pas d'instructions

Instruction 2
Change the structure 

You can use your mind map to re-arrange the information for the paragraphs. By now you may have sentences in your head so you can start a Word document.

Slide 8 - Diapositive

Cet élément n'a pas d'instructions

From the mind map to the 
Word document! How do we do this? 
***You often end with the title of the whole essay***

But you can start with the new paragraph titles or the sentences that you have in your head :) 

Slide 9 - Diapositive

Cet élément n'a pas d'instructions

Must do:
* Use an online version of Word and
* Share with Ms Backx and your beloved classmate who gave you feedback during previous lesson. 

** Use the rest of the hour **

Slide 10 - Diapositive

Cet élément n'a pas d'instructions

The next slides could be helpful
Scribble, write, jot, note...create :)  

Slide 11 - Diapositive

Cet élément n'a pas d'instructions

From havo
4 MM24!

Slide 12 - Diapositive

Cet élément n'a pas d'instructions

                      Also in MM24
Because you will have to use 
APA construction and 
citation rules
also for your PWS

Slide 13 - Diapositive

Cet élément n'a pas d'instructions

Next lesson:
The Writing!! 

Slide 14 - Diapositive

Cet élément n'a pas d'instructions

So don’t start at home!! 

Slide 15 - Diapositive

Cet élément n'a pas d'instructions