Article feedback

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• havo
• Leerjaar 2

Aim

Aim: I can give feedback on a classmates writing

I can create a writing aim for myself for the Checkpoint test

Today

Aims

Writing assignment

Writing assignment feedback

Writing aim

Aims check

Writing assignment

15 minutes

Finish your writing assignment

Check structure

Check spelling and grammar

Article feedback

Spark: content of good feedback

• Specific  Link your feedback to a specific part of the review.
• Problem  Offer a solution to the problems you find.
• Action  When the feedback is read, the writer should know how to improve.
• References  The feedback has to do with what you see in the checklist
• Kind  Don't be mean, be critical and helpful

Assignment feedback

1 Get your partner's assignment

2 Read the checklist

3 Read the article

4 Give your partner feedback

5 What do YOU think they need to do to get a better result?

6 Write your ideas in full sentences

Keep your feedback safe!!!

Writing aim

Look at your feedback

Which bit of feedback would you like to work on for the test?

Write an aim explaining what and how you will achieve your aim

I would like to improve... I will do this by....

Aim

Aim: I have a clear idea of what will be asked of me in the Checkpoint test

I can make a writing aim for myself for the Checkpoint test

GOOD LUCK!