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Aim: I have a clear idea of what will be asked of me in the Checkpoint test

I can make a writing aim for myself for the Checkpoint test
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Aim
Aim: I have a clear idea of what will be asked of me in the Checkpoint test

I can make a writing aim for myself for the Checkpoint test

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Today
Use of English feedback
Checkpoint paper 1 questions
Checkpoint paper 2 questions
Article feedback
Writing aim

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Checkpoint practise 1+2
Get your answers

Lets go over them together!!!

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Use of English
Proper nouns v's pronouns

Past/present tense?

Dutch words

...?

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Never, ever, ever ever, ever again!

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alot
i
ur
gonna
yeah
life
live

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Checkpoint answers

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Article feedback

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Spark: content of good feedback
  • Specific  Link your feedback to a specific part of the review.
  • Problem  Offer a solution to the problems you find.
  • Action  When the feedback is read, the writer should know how to improve.
  • References  The feedback has to do with what you see in the checklist
  • Kind  Don't be mean, be critical and helpful

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Article feedback
1 Get your partner's article
2 Read the checklist
3 Read the article
4 Give your partner feedback
5 What do YOU think they need to do to get a better result?
6 Write your ideas in full sentences

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Keep your feedback safe!!!

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Writing aim
Look at your feedback

Which bit of feedback would you like to work on for the test?

Write an aim explaining what and how you will achieve your aim

I would like to improve... I will do this by....

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Aim
Aim: I have a clear idea of what will be asked of me in the Checkpoint test

I can make a writing aim for myself for the Checkpoint test

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Slide 14 - Vidéo