Mrch 14 - 3V - P3

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• havo, vwo
• Leerjaar 2

To do:

• insight + notebook  on the table
• Air pods/head phones/etc + phone in the bag

Assignment:

Write down in your notebook:

Questions about Writing II and/or the opinion essay

Goals

I can write a formal essay

I can explain the new test

Warming-up: formal or not?

Yo, what's up?

I regret to inform you the class 

is cancelled

In my opinion the charity should not be supported due to odd 

finances

I think the charity should not be supported due to odd

finances

Difference?

 I considered various research methods for the study.

Various research methods were considered for the study.

Programme

Rubric Writing II

Peer feedback writing task

Tests checking + rubrics

Rubric

- What do you notice?

- questions

Who finished writing the essay?

Peer feedback time!

Step 1: copy your essay on a new page (within the same document)

Step 2: swap laptops with a partner

Step 3: partner adds name on this 2nd page + uses a different colour for feedback, tips, etc.

Step 3: Be critical but good peer!

Peer feedback

Round 1: structure

Are there paragraphs and also the necessary number of paragraphs (about 4 to 5)

+ word count: 250 - 300 words

Peer feedback

Round 2: opinion + support

1. Is it clear what the person's opinion is
+ 

does the person use a correct organization:

> opinion (main point or argument)

> support ( reason why)

> example (back it up with facts)

Peer feedback

Round 3: Formal writing

1. Contractions (don't, isn't, etc.)

2. Lots of pers. pronouns (pers vnw) like I, she, we, they, etc.

3. Logical structure by using linking words 

4. Variation in words (try to stay away from too, like, etc.

> Important: try not to use too many per. pronouns! Especially 'I'.

Peer feedback

Round 4: grammar + vocab

Lots of mistakes in grammar and vocabulary > write them down

Homework!

Rewrite the essay (writing task 4E) and submit it on Its Learning before the next class!
Page 1: original essay

Page 2: feedback

Page 3: rewritten/retyped essay

Test

Reading 1

Do not write on test + answers

Homework!

Rewrite the essay (writing task 4E) and submit it on Its Learning before the next class!
Page 1: original essay

Page 2: feedback

Page 3: rewritten/retyped essay

PS. between 250 - 300 words

Thank you for paying attention!