Apr 16th- 3V - P3

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• havo, vwo
• Leerjaar 2

To do:

• insight + notebook  on the table
• Air pods/head phones/etc + phone in the bag

Assignment:

How many linking words can you use to (write them down!) :

- show an example

- to compare something (or multiple things) 

Goals

I can write a (formal) letter to a newspaper

Important: change of test date

Tue. 14th of May

Linking words

- show an example

- to compare something (or multiple things) 

How many can we find?

Programme

Peer feedback writing task

Leerdoelen obv de tasks

Who finished writing the letter?

Peer feedback time!

Step 1: copy your essay on a new page (within the same document)

Step 2: swap laptops with a partner

Step 3: partner adds name on this 2nd page + uses a different colour for feedback, tips, etc.

Step 3: Be critical but good peer!

Peer feedback

Round 1: structure

Are there paragraphs and also the necessary number of paragraphs (about  5)

(leuke extra:word count: 250 - 300 words

Peer feedback

Round 2: opinion + support

Is it clear what the person's opinion is
+ 

does the person use a correct organization:

> opinion (main point or argument + reasoning)

> understanding of problem and cause

+

suggestions and results (and in the proper paragraphs)

Peer feedback

Round 3: Formal writing

1. Contractions (don't, isn't, etc.)

2. Lots of pers. pronouns (pers vnw) like I, she, we, they, etc.

3. Logical structure by using linking words 

4. Variation in words (try to stay away from too, like, etc.

> Important: try not to use too many per. pronouns! Especially 'I'.

Peer feedback

Round 4: grammar + vocab

Lots of mistakes in grammar and vocabulary > write them down

Homework!

Rewrite the essay (writing task 5E) and submit it on Its Learning before the next class!
Page 1: original essay

Page 2: feedback

Page 3: rewritten/retyped essay

+ 

Vocabulary bank 6, page 139 > types of advertising, exercise 1 and 2. Consumerism: exercise 1 and 2

Homework!

Rewrite the essay (writing task 5E) and submit it on Its Learning before the next class!
Page 1: original letter

Page 2: feedback

Page 3: rewritten/retyped letter

PS. between 250 - 300 words  (10 % margin)

Leerdoelen

In groepje van 4/5 stel nu op basis van de essay + letter een aantal doelen samen.

Waar werken we naar toe en wat je moet kunnen?

Thank you for paying attention!