V6 en 21-22 essay and peer feedback

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Hand in practice essay & feedback
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Do and don'ts & feedback

Slide 1 - Diapositive

What are do/don'ts of essay writing?

Slide 2 - Carte mentale

Improve the sentences: High loans and enormous debts. It is all because of the high study loans.

Slide 3 - Question ouverte

Title: undeniable debt: improve

Slide 4 - Question ouverte

studying is important for several things; a bright future and personal skills. Improve

Slide 5 - Question ouverte

Swap essays: read and check:
which linking words can you spot?

Slide 6 - Question ouverte


what is the statement sentence?

Slide 7 - Question ouverte

give examples of C1 level voca

Slide 8 - Carte mentale

give an example of use of passive

Slide 9 - Question ouverte

Are there examples of sentences with: I, you, they, we, our?

Slide 10 - Question ouverte

What is the structure of the essay?
(intro etc)

Slide 11 - Question ouverte

which words are not up to level C1?

Slide 12 - Carte mentale

Coherence: does essay make sense?
any sentence/words that do not make sense?

Slide 13 - Question ouverte

Repetition: are words/phrases/sentences repeated?

Slide 14 - Question ouverte

tips & tops
Give a mark for the essay > be fair

Write 1 top and 2 tips on the essay for your classmate to improve their work.
Improve & final hand in



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