H5E - P2 - Week 5 - Lesson 1-2

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H5E - P2 - Week 5 - Lesson 1-2

Learning Goals

You will...

- learn more about the Renaissance period

- learn from your writing mistakes

What do you know about
the Old English period?

What do you know about
the Middle English period?

Literary History Information

The Renaissance Period (PPT)

What is the one thing you remember about
the Renaissance period after today?

Essay Feedback

- What do you see? 

- Things that I noticed

- Correct the thesis statements

- Good examples

- Receive feedback on your own essay

- Grading system

What do you see?

The money used for space travel to Mars could have way better use. For example, the money could instead be used for big important problems in the world. Big problems that have been on this earth for years, like famine, could be made less of a problem.

Health problems caused by excessive consumption of fast food have reached epidemic proportions worldwide. It is important to put a high tax on junk food, so people do not want to eat it. A fat tax makes people eat healthier. 

What do you see?

First, it is useful to do space programs in space. It Is important to know what is surround us. We need to know if it is dangerous or not. Therefore, astronauts should go to Mars to investigate.

Al in all, the space missions to Mars are important. Because from the information one gets they learn very important things. As a result, they make it possible for humans in the future to life on Mars. besides, all these launches are not even that harmful for the nature.

The fat tax is in general a good way to solve this problem in Great-Britain. But why? It is known that people are eating more at fast-food restaurants nowadays. The most of the people in fast-food restaurants are kids or young adults. Because of that fact people in Great-Britain will getting at a young age very fat. And so on they will suffer from obese.

Good thesis examples

There should be fat tax on unhealthy products in Britain. 

Space programs are a total waste of money.

A fat tax makes people eat healthier. 

Therefore, Mars space missions are a possible waste of money.

Correct the thesis statement:
Studying will soon only be for the rich, is not this the time to ring the bells before it’s too late?!

Correct the thesis statement:
Is the study loan system getting out of hand?

Learning Goals

You will...

- learn more about the Renaissance period

- learn from your writing mistakes

Bye!