H5B - P2 - Week 5 - Lesson 1-2

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H5B - P2 - Week 5 - Lesson 1-2

Learning Goals

You will...

- learn more about the Renaissance period

- learn from your writing mistakes

What do you know about
the Old English period?

What do you know about
the Middle English period?

Literary History Information

The Renaissance Period (PPT)

What is the one thing you remember about
the Renaissance period after today?

Essay Feedback

- What do you see? 

- Things that I noticed

- Correct the thesis statements

- Good examples

- Receive feedback on your own essay

- Grading system

What do you see?

Exploring mars can also be a good investment, by exploring mars we will get to know our universe much better than before, recent studies have shown signs of water deep below the surface of mars but drilling on mars to get that water will be a very time consuming and expensive process. 

As already said in the introduction, we can learn a lot from watching at space travel missions. There is so much we do not know about in the universum. Generally known people are quite interessted in what is more to see and it wil have a good addition for our future. By broading are knowledge about these space travells a lot of questions can be awnsered in the course of time.

What do you see?

A good reason to doesn’t put BTW on the fatty products is, people are choosing by himself what they want to buy. And putting BTW on the fatty doesn’t change really much.

Obesity is a growing problem in the UK. It has always been a problem but lately the urge of it has grown. To solve this problem the government has come up with a plan. They want to introduce a taxation on unhealthy products called ‘fat tax’. The introduction of fat tax is the best way to get people to eat healthier and reduce obesity in the UK. 

Good thesis examples

The introduction of fat tax is the best way to get people to eat healthier and reduce obesity in the UK. 

Space programs are a total waste of money.

A fat tax makes people eat healthier.

Therefore, Mars space missions are a possible waste of money.

Correct the thesis statement:
Studying will soon only be for the rich, is not this the time to ring the bells before it’s too late?!

Correct the thesis statement:
Is the study loan system getting out of hand?

Learning Goals

You will...

- learn more about the Renaissance period

- learn from your writing mistakes

Bye!