Take off your coat, take off your hats and head phone/earbuds
Chewing gum in the trashcan
Phone in the bag
only notebook + pens on table
Assignment:
In COMPLETE SILENCE (So no talking with your neighbour) write down all that you remember from last English class regarding writing a more formal email.
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4:00
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EngelsMiddelbare schoolhavo, vwoLeerjaar 1
This lesson contains 18 slides, with text slides.
Lesson duration is: 50 min
Items in this lesson
To do:
Find a seat
Take off your coat, take off your hats and head phone/earbuds
Chewing gum in the trashcan
Phone in the bag
only notebook + pens on table
Assignment:
In COMPLETE SILENCE (So no talking with your neighbour) write down all that you remember from last English class regarding writing a more formal email.
timer
4:00
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Goals for today
I know how to properly use linking words
I know what goals I need to work on in order to improve my skills and knowledge regarding writing a MORE FORMAL email
Slide 2 - Slide
Programme
Writing test prep
Quick peer-review
Re-rewrite it + submit it again on Its Learning
Slide 3 - Slide
Test: Writing I
Monday 7th of Oct.
Goal: Writing an email
to a penpal
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Writing test instruction
What are the writing conventions regarding an email?
Best ways to start and end en email?
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Writing test instruction
Start:
Hello name,
Hi ...,
Dear ....,
End:
Bye for now,
See you soon,
Kind regards,
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Difference formal and informal?
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Making it more formal
- Word order
- Avoiding repetition (in words and structures)
- Leave out contractions
- Use the correct punctuation
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Linking words
Contrast
Result/Conclusion
Addition
Comparison
Where to place them?
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Peer-review
With your neighbour check the 2 paragraphs this person has written (as was part of the homework)
> as a peer reviewer, add your name to the file
> highlight and remark what can be improved upon
+
Fill in the learning aims card for this person
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Round 1
Word order
> especially look out for time + place
Place then time
timer
4:00
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Round 2
Repetition of words.
look out for too many: so, very, nice.
But also sentence structure (zin structuur).
Eg. I am going home. I am cycling all the way there. etc.
timer
4:00
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Round 3
Contractions
NO: It's, I'll, where's, etc.
Yes: It is, I will, where is, etc.
timer
3:00
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Round 4
Correct punctuation
timer
3:00
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Homework Mon. 30th of Sept
Use the peer feedback and rewrite the 2 paragraphs in your notebook.
Lesson duration is: 50 min
