Oct 2 - P1 - 3V

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• havo, vwo
• Leerjaar 1

To do:

• Find a seat
• Take off your coat, take off your hats and head phone/earbuds
•  Chewing gum  in the trashcan
• Phone in the bag 
• only notebook + pens on table

Assignment:

In COMPLETE SILENCE (So no talking with your neighbour) write down all that you remember from last English class.

Goals for today

I know what goals I need to work on in order to improve my skills and knowledge regarding writing a MORE FORMAL email

Programme

Writing test prep

Quick peer-review

Re-rewrite it + submit it again on Its Learning

Test: Writing I

 Monday 9th of Oct. (?)

Goal: Writing an email 

to a penpal

Writing test instruction

What are the writing conventions regarding an email?

Best ways to start and end en email?

Writing test instruction

Start:

Hello name, 

Hi ...,

Dear ...., 

End:

Bye for now,

See you soon,

Kind regards,

Difference formal and informal?

Making it more formal

- Word order

- Avoiding repetition (in words and structures)

- Leave out contractions

- Use the correct punctuation

Linking words

Contrast

Result/Conclusion

Addition

Comparison

Where to place them?

Peer-review

Within the file, copy the rewritten email 

(within the same file) on a new page.

> as a peer reviewer, add your name to the file

> highlight and remark what can be improved upon

+

Fill in the learning aims card for this person

Round 1

Word order 

> especially look out for time + place

Place then time

Round 2

Repetition of words.

look out for too many:
so, very, nice.

But also sentence structure
(zin structuur). 

Eg. I am going home. I am cycling all the way there. etc.

Round 3

Contractions

NO: It's, I'll, where's, etc.

Yes: It is, I will, where is, etc.

Round 4

Correct punctuation

Homework Thur. 5th of Oct.

Use the peer feedback and rewrite the email and submit 

it again on Its learning.
> Check your learning aims card, work on what you have to improve on.

+ Study: words 61 - 105

Thank you for paying attention!