Look for information in the text (past/present/future views)
Too much text in the prepositional phrase – they were still fairly popular in country areas in the east
Fronted adverbial – sentence structure (example) Later Mrs Versteeg following her surprise encounter, she developed an interest in wolves.
Conclusion writing
Long sentences
Numbers written out in full
Cuteness
More than one animal – not enough detail..
Points not expanded/too little information given