Sept 28 - P1 - 3V

To do:
  • Find a seat
  • Take off your coat, take off your hats and head phone/earbuds
  •  Chewing gum  in the trashcan
  • Phone in the bag 
  • only notebook + pens on table
Assignment:
Draw the picture in front you + describe the placement of at least 3 objects in relation to one another: 
EG. the stool is front of the table 

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To do:
  • Find a seat
  • Take off your coat, take off your hats and head phone/earbuds
  •  Chewing gum  in the trashcan
  • Phone in the bag 
  • only notebook + pens on table
Assignment:
Draw the picture in front you + describe the placement of at least 3 objects in relation to one another: 
EG. the stool is front of the table 

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4:00

Slide 1 - Diapositive

Available options
- (in the) back
- in (front) of
- in the middle (top row)
- on the right/left
- bottom/ top ... left/right-hand corner
- in the background/ foreground

Let's create a picture!

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Goals for today
I can use prepositions of place

I know what goals I need to work on in order to improve my skills and knowledge regarding writing a MORE FORMAL email

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Programme
Preposition Warming-up

Discussing the writing test

Re-rewrite your email 










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Difference formal and informal?

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Test: Writing I
 Monday 9th of Oct. (?)
Goal: Writing an email 
to a penpal

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Writing test instruction
What are the writing conventions regarding an email?




PS. take notes!

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Writing test instruction
What are the writing conventions regarding an email?

1. Use of paragraphs (blank line between each 
+ 1 subject per paragraph)
2. Correct start + end

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Writing test instruction
Linking words;
However            Furthermore
Despite              Whereas
Additionally       Likewise
Even though     Due to

Linking words;
Obligated    Definitely     Excessive
Persuasive    Desirable     Cherish
Mutual        Rather           A lack of
Ignorance     Certainly     Persistent
Fearless     Self-assured      Pretend


DO HIGHLIGHT YOUR WORDS!!!!

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Making it more formal
- Word order
- Avoiding repetition (in words and structures)
- Leave out contractions
- Use the correct punctuation

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subject - onderwerp
verb - werkwoord
object - object
place - plaats
time - tijd

Let op je adverbs (bijwoorden)
Making it more formal - word order

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New or difficult for you?
Try to write down an example sentence that means a lot to you personally or try to remember the acronym(s) (afkortingen) 

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Quick check - spot + improve the mistakes
1. The students seem happy, but the teacher serious looks.
2. We went to the local Burger King at 3PM in Leeuwarden.
3. I waiting will be for you at the station
4. You will tell I the story at school tomorrow

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Quick check - spot + improve the mistakes
1. The students seem happy, but the teacher serious looks serious . 
(change place of adverb)

2. We went to the local Burger King at 3PM in Leeuwarden at 3PM  
(SVOPT, place then time)
3. I will be waiting will be for you at the station
(ww: will + be + main verb-ing)
4. You I will tell I  you the story at school tomorrow
Subject + verb + (indirect) object

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Making it more formal - repetition
Improve these sentences: 
1. Jette is paying attention, Jette is looking at her neighbour. Jette is also writing down notes.

2. The dog was loved by its family, it was given a lot of attention, they loved the dog so much and because of that it also enjoyed a lot of treats.
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Avoid repetition - structure

Jette is paying attention, Jette is looking at her neighbour. Jette is also writing down notes

Jette is paying attention as well as/and/ in addition to looking at her neighbour. She is also making notes.


Linking words
Pers. vwn/pronouns

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Avoid repetition - words
The dog was loved by its family, it was given a lot of attention, 
they loved the dog so much and because of that it also enjoyed a lot of treats.

The dog was loved by its family, it was given plenty of attention. The family adored the dog in such abundance and due to this great love it enjoyed a surplus amount of treats.

> find and use synonyms (synoniemen) + that is why it is important to study the vocabulary list!


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Making it more formal - contractions
What are they?

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Making it more formal - contractions
Contracted form
It's > It is
I'll > I will
I'm > I am
where's > where is
etc.
Writing formal? NO CONTRACTIONS!
I will not write contractions when writing something formal

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The rubric...

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Re-rewrite your email + Insight
Study the vocab list: 1 – 60 

Adjust your e-mail to the requirements of writing test instruction + bring your laptop (fully charged) to school next class!

Insight: Vocabulary insight 1: 5, 6 (page 15)

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