March 31st- 3V - P3

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• havo, vwo
• Leerjaar 2

To do:

• insight + notebook  on the table
• Air pods/head phones/etc + phone in the bag

Assignment:

How many linking words can you use to (write them down!) :

- show an example

- to compare something (or multiple things) 

Goals

I can write a (formal) letter to a newspaper

Linking words

- show an example

- to compare something (or multiple things) 

How many can we find?

Programme

Peer feedback writing task

Letter to a newspaper

Who finished writing the letter?

Peer feedback time!

Step 1: copy your essay on a new page (within the same document)

Step 2: swap laptops with a partner

Step 3: partner adds name on this 2nd page + uses a different colour for feedback, tips, etc.

Step 3: Be critical but good peer!

Peer feedback

Round 1: structure

Are there paragraphs and also the necessary number of paragraphs (about  5)

(leuke extra:word count: 250 - 300 words

Peer feedback

Round 2: opinion + support

Is it clear what the person's opinion is
+ 

does the person use a correct organization:

> opinion (main point or argument + reasoning)

> understanding of problem and cause

+

suggestions and results (and in the proper paragraphs)

Peer feedback

Round 3: Formal writing

1. Contractions (don't, isn't, etc.)

2. Lots of pers. pronouns (pers vnw) like I, she, we, they, etc.

3. Logical structure by using linking words 

4. Variation in words (try to stay away from too, like, etc.

> Important: try not to use too many per. pronouns! Especially 'I'.

Peer feedback

Round 4: grammar + vocab

Lots of mistakes in grammar and vocabulary > write them down

Homework!

Rewrite the essay (writing task 5E) and submit it on Its Learning before the next class!
Page 1: original essay

Page 2: feedback

Page 3: rewritten/retyped essay

PS. between 250 - 300 words (10 % margin)

Homework!

Rewrite the letter (writing task 5E, page 65) and submit it on Its Learning before the next class!
Page 1: original letter

Page 2: feedback

Page 3: rewritten/retyped letter

PS. between 250 - 300 words  (10 % margin)

Thank you for paying attention!